Week 4 Peer Review

Lisa Dennard – unable to review

Lori Robertson – unable to review

Megan Peterson
Your Conscious or CONscience article was good, but not the best that I’ve read of your work. Personally, I found this to be a very difficult piece to complete on my own, so I’m having a hard time criticizing your work. I don’t think that you did a bad job or rephrasing the reading material, I just didn’t feel as though your response flowed well. Had I not had previous knowledge to the information that you presented I would have been very confused. That was a difficult piece to respond on, my only advice would be if you would have chosen one main idea and focused on explaining only that point. Overall, I feel that you picked out interesting information from the related article.

I really enjoyed reading your interpretation of Nightmare? I thought that it was very smart of you to separate your response into an objective and subjective section. The objection section was very strong and really gave me a great visual of the painting without looking at it. I also enjoyed reading your subjective view. What an interesting piece of art! I too had feelings of uneasiness after viewing it.